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1、皮卡丘(或雷丘):主兽当然保留啦!^_^ 捕获方法:初始兽(皮卡丘用雷之石进化成雷丘)
2、喷火龙:速度、特攻很强。是队伍的主力。 捕获方法:在第二个道观城市上方有人给小火龙,lv.36进化成喷火龙。)
3、妙蛙花:能力平均,草+毒抗性不错,打击面也不少。 捕获方法:在第二个道观城市的精灵中心左边的房子里,小姐会给你妙蛙种子,LV.32时进化成妙蛙花)
4、水箭龟:二防均过百,可以打消耗战。 捕获方法:第三个道观城市右下侧的地鼠山洞,通过后向下有个大房子,里面有个人给你一件武器,按到精灵身上,回到那个城市,市中有个警察给你杰尼龟,LV.36进化成水箭龟。
5、暴鲤龙:水+冰+飞去除了草的弱点,能力也不错。 捕获方法:在第一道观通往第二道观城市之间有一个山洞,门口有一个精灵中心,里面有人给你鲤鱼王,LV.20进化成暴鲤龙。
6、急冻鸟:神兽。 捕获方法:在第六道观通往第七道观的水路之间,有一个双子岛,深处可以抓到LV.50的急冻鸟。
7、闪电鸟:神兽。 捕获方法:在第三道观通往鬼城之间有一个黑黑的山洞,入口的最上方有一大片水,用冲浪冲到尽头,会有一间大房子(无人发电场),最深处有LV.50的闪电鸟。
8、火焰鸟:神兽。 捕获方法:在通往四大天王的山洞里的一个洞穴最深处(不是出去)有LV.50的火焰鸟。
9、卡比兽:HP和防御超高,普通的属性弱点也很少。 捕获方法:在第三道观右侧的桥上有一只LV.30的卡比兽堵住了交叉口,用精灵笛叫醒它。
10、超梦:LV.65种族值680的大神,必抓。 捕获方法:通关后第二个道观城市的上方(拿小火龙的地方),左侧向下有一条小河,用冲浪冲到尽头,在岸上有一个山洞,通关前进不了(实力也不够啊......^_^),现在可以进了,最深处有LV.65的超梦。

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主人公小智和劲敌小茂登场

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游戏开始出现在真新镇,小智想要去草丛走动走动却被大木博士拦住,还发现野生的皮卡丘回研究所,拿初始宝可梦时候被小茂抢走

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无奈之下开启了小智与皮卡丘的缘分,从博士那里得到刚收服的Lv5 
离开前小茂发起挑战使用Lv5 

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离开真新镇,来到常磐市,在友好商店里得到包裹,返回真新镇交给博士,从博士那里得到宝可梦图鉴
在小茂家从他姐姐那里得到城镇地图,再次前往常磐市,左边的22号路会碰到小茂,并对战Lv9Lv8

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返回常磐市出发前往2号路遇到一醉汉教如何捕捉宝可梦
过2号路穿常磐森林来到尼比市,挑战道馆馆主小刚Lv10Lv12,胜利后获得灰色徽章

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右边出尼比市来到月见山,山口的宝可梦中心有个大叔500元出售鲤鱼王

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月见山内部发现火箭队抢夺化石,击败科学家后可以选一个化石拿走

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准备出去前遇到火箭队上来抢化石(武藏和小次郎),战胜后出月见山来到了华蓝市
宝可梦中心左边的房子可以从NPC那里领养Lv10

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先去挑战华蓝道馆馆主小霞Lv18Lv21,胜利后获得蓝色徽章

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华蓝市上方进入24号路,遇到小茂对战Lv18Lv15Lv15Lv17
路上从一名NPC处得到Lv10

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右边前往正辉的研究所,途中有个训练家从他下方过去,先不去挑战他,用来后面触发一个BUG
帮正辉变回人形后得到船票

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返回华蓝市,上方墙洞出去击败火箭队得到TM28-挖洞
向下来到5号路,路上有宝可梦饲养屋

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从地道里穿过来到枯叶市,宝可梦中心隔壁屋子拿破钓竿
下方的俱乐部拿到兑换卷,华蓝市自行车店兑换一辆自行车

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枯叶港口上圣安奴号,尽头又碰到小茂对战Lv19Lv18Lv16Lv20
船长室照顾一下船长得到HM01-居合斩

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劈开树木挑战枯叶道馆馆主马志士Lv28,胜利后得到橙色徽章
路中心的君莎小姐将Lv10托付给小智

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从枯叶市的地鼠洞穴来到2号路,过道里从博士助手处得到HM05-闪光(必须收服10只或以上宝可梦)

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返回华蓝市,来到右侧的9号路进入岩山隧道,洞里需要闪光
另一头连接这紫苑镇,现在暂时没啥剧情,往左边地道里走去
地道门口的这么训练家不要触发对战,从最上面进入地道

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出来就到彩虹市,挑战馆主莉佳Lv30Lv32Lv32,胜利后得到彩虹徽章

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彩虹市左边一个小路劈树进去得到HM02-飞翔

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接下来去触发一个BUG去,回到之前地道出口的光头训练家处
从地道门出来往下走一步立刻按出菜单,使用飞翔飞到华蓝市
上去24号路上方一名之前也未挑战的训练家地方,从最上方过去引他上来挑战,获胜后继续飞到紫苑镇

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紫苑镇左边路口出来自动弹出菜单,取消掉进入对战,出现Lv7

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回归剧情,彩虹市下方食堂里得到硬币盒,游戏中心打败一名可疑人物后发现海报后的秘道机关

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内部取得电梯钥匙后启动电梯来到4楼,出来见到武藏和小次郎,发生对战

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获胜后上去挑战火箭队老大坂木,得到宝可梦眼睛

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返回紫苑镇进入宝可梦塔,遇到小茂Lv25Lv20Lv22//Lv25

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进入顶层前遇到鬼魂的拦路,使用宝可梦眼睛得知是一只死去的嘎啦嘎啦

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上去击败火箭队解救富士老人,得到宝可梦笛子

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紫苑镇下方前进,途中遇到卡比兽睡觉挡路,使用笛子唤醒他后对战

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11号路的屋子里得到超级钓竿,一路狂奔进入浅红市,挑战道馆馆主阿桔Lv44Lv44Lv44Lv50,胜利后得到粉红徽章

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前往宝可梦狩猎区,捡到金牙,深处的房子里得到HM03-冲浪

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将金牙归还狩猎场长后得到HM04-怪力,右边屋子得到好钓竿

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左边出来返回彩虹市,在彩虹百货大楼顶层买瓶饮料

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彩虹大楼从后防进去,顶层得到伊布

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右边进入金黄市,将水给工作人员才能通行

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金黄市已经被火箭队占领了,去西鲁夫公司,5楼得到钥匙卡后从9楼进入公司内部
小茂已经等候多时了Lv35Lv35Lv35//Lv40//
旁边的工作人员会赠送

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顶楼击败武藏和小次郎后挑战坂木,获胜后从社长那里得到大师球

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金黄市恢复正常,挑战道馆馆主娜姿Lv50Lv50Lv50,胜利后得到金黄徽章

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道馆旁边的格斗道场踢馆成功后可以选择一只宝可梦/

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回到浅红市,下方冲浪到双子岛,洞窟内部利用岩石挡住水流后可以捕捉Lv50

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双子岛旁边就是红莲岛,岛上可以复活化石
尼比市博物馆的右边进去可以得到神秘琥珀(化石翼龙)

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挑战道馆进不去,左边废弃屋里得到钥匙

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做好准备挑战火系专家夏伯Lv48Lv50Lv54,胜利得到红色徽章

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岩山隧道右边冲浪来到无人发电厂,内部遇到Lv50

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红莲岛沿着21水路回到真新镇,再去常磐市挑战道馆
馆主居然是火箭队老大坂木Lv50Lv53Lv53Lv53Lv55,胜利得到绿色徽章

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集齐8个徽章,左边22号路再次遇到小茂Lv47Lv50Lv45Lv45//Lv53//

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穿过8个大门进入冠军之路,内部还有只Lv50

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终于抵达石英高原

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冰天王:科拿 Lv54Lv53Lv54Lv56Lv56

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格斗天王:希巴 Lv53Lv56Lv55Lv55Lv58

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幽灵天王:菊子 Lv56Lv56Lv55Lv58Lv60

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龙天王:渡 Lv58Lv56Lv56Lv60Lv62

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小茂已经先一步击败四天王,还必须击败他才能成为冠军
Lv61Lv59Lv61Lv63//Lv65//

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晒一波阵容,登入殿堂后一周目结束

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二周目开始,飞到华蓝市进入华蓝洞窟,最深处发现一只Lv70,叫声有点奇怪啊
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11 月 4 日,在发表完一张带有简单上色的画作后,HamsterFragment 删除了他(或她)的推特帐号。

这个名字可能很难唤醒人的记忆,但如果在微博或推特上游走够久,总会见过他的作品。在灰蓝色的背景下,有位少女在以各种方式寻死。

HamsterFragment 笔下的寻死少女身着一套学生制服与过膝袜,总是沉着眼撇着嘴,准备死亡或是等待死亡的到来。在雨夜爬上屋顶与避雷针起舞,在锻刀铁匠旁的水池等候入浴,叼起一根炸药烟准备点燃,挑战绕口令全集败至咬舌喋血。

这种系列创作形式并不新鲜。早在 2003 年,英国漫画家安迪·莱利就已经创作出《找死的兔子》(2007 年由南海出版公司引进中国),以各式诙谐的寻死方式自成一派,在人们的记忆中占据一席之地。诞生于网络时代的 HamsterFragment 笔下少女的寻死方式则更具时代气息,譬如剪下树上最后一片落叶,追杀那只不可触碰的鸡,又或挖开周边全是数字 1 标牌的方块,在地上描绘起不可述名的老鼠图案。

有时候她的寻死也不仅是为死。她曾为了让乞讨的小男孩吃点东西,自己买下一个西瓜,吃完后将自己活埋,最后为小男孩献上一片瓜田。或是为了挽救一位投资失败的白领,投资、打工、贩卖器官,在男子跳楼的下方,铺起救援布,里面装满钱财。

借助这样一种总是荒谬、常常玩哏、时而温情、充满诙谐的创作手法,少女的寻死似乎并不让人感到压抑,反倒有一种莫名的轻快感。也正因如此,伴随着帐号注销的最后一张创作发表时,读者们才会如此惊惶。

在这最后一张创作里,一位少女——似乎正是一直在寻死的少女——躺在铺于地上的被褥中,头顶旁边是一个硕大的纸箱,手边是一台电脑。少女发衣凌乱,双目依旧缺乏神采,注视着显示着什么的电脑,手里紧攥着被子,脸上浮着虚弱的微笑——准备迎来结束的微笑。

艺术创作的鬼使神差正在于此,每一次少女寻死时人们都知道她将返回迎来下一次尝试,而唯一一张未去寻死的少女出现时,人们却从未如此接近地感到死亡。伴随着 HamsterFragment 删除了他的帐号,这种“死亡”似乎确已成真。

HamsterFragment 的推特从不与他人互动,使得人们对他实在知之甚少。可能知晓的信息,就是他——或是他笔下的少女生日是 6 月 20 日,而他唯一的转推也只与生日有关。在他还未开始创作寻死系列之前少量发表的照片里,他曾创作纸质画作——下面垫满日文报纸,也曾介绍如何建立座标轴,按照角度与比例绘制透视正确的阶梯。另一张照片里,上床下桌的布置旁立着一个少女的立牌,桌子的角落摆着岛风的手办,爬梯旁放着 M40 狙击步枪。他或许是专门研习美术的学生,有着自己的爱好,不过这终归只是人们的猜测。

网络世界里人们的联系既紧密也脆弱,有时候只是删除帐号就能将曾经存在的一切全部抹去,不留一点痕迹。在 HamsterFragment 删除帐号后,推特上许多读者都在回忆他和那位寻死少女。有的干脆地写下 HamsterFragment IS GONE;有的保存下那张最后的作品,希望他能安睡;有的记录下 HamsterFragment 的作品给他的感受;更多的人相互询问着究竟发生了什么,但恐怕永远也不会知道答案。

这个『少女一心寻死』的系列创作就这么以一种令人难以释怀的方式猝然宣告结束,而创作也已经与现实搅在一起,让人难以分辨二者界限。

不知道 HamsterFragment 现在究竟身处何方,希望他能好好的。还有那位无数次寻死的少女,奔波寻觅了那么久也已经累了吧,现在,就先好好睡上一会吧。

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一、最初投稿Cover letter

  Dear Editors:
  We would like to submit the enclosed manuscript entitled “Paper Title”, which we wish to be considered for publication in “Journal Name”. No conflict of interest exits in the submission of this manuscript, and manuscript is approved by all authors for publication. I would like to declare on behalf of my co-authors that the work described was original research that has not been published previously, and not under consideration for publication elsewhere, in whole or in part. All the authors listed have approved the manuscript that is enclosed.
  In this work, we evaluated …… (简要介绍一下论文的创新性). I hope this paper is suitable for “Journal Name”.
  The following is a list of possible reviewers for your consideration:
  1) Name A E-mail: ××××@××××
  2) Name B E-mail: ××××@××××
  We deeply appreciate your consideration of our manuscript, and we look forward to receiving comments from the reviewers. If you have any queries, please don’t hesitate to contact me at the address below.
  Thank you and best regards.
  Yours sincerely,
  ××××××
  Corresponding author:
  Name: ×××
  E-mail: ××××@××××

二、催稿信

  Dear Prof. ×××:
  Sorry for disturbing you. I am not sure if it is the right time to contact you to inquire about the status of my submitted manuscript titled “Paper Title”. (ID: 文章稿号), although the status of “With Editor” has been lasting for more than two months, since submitted to journal three months ago. I am just wondering that my manuscript has been sent to reviewers or not?
  I would be greatly appreciated if you could spend some of your time check the status for us. I am very pleased to hear from you on the reviewer’s comments.
  Thank you very much for your consideration.
  Best regards!
  Yours sincerely,
  ××××××
  Corresponding author:
  Name: ×××
  E-mail: ××××@××××

三、修改稿Cover letter

  Dear Dr/ Prof..(写上负责你文章编辑的姓名,显得尊重,因为第一次的投稿不知道具体负责的编辑,只能用通用的Editors):
  On behalf of my co-authors, we thank you very much for giving us an opportunity to revise our manuscript, we appreciate editor and reviewers very much for their positive and constructive comments and suggestions on our manuscript entitled “Paper Title”. (ID: 文章稿号).
  We have studied reviewer’s comments carefully and have made revision which marked in red in the paper. We have tried our best to revise our manuscript according to the comments. Attached please find the revised version, which we would like to submit for your kind consideration.
  We would like to express our great appreciation to you and reviewers for comments on our paper. Looking forward to hearing from you.
  Thank you and best regards.
  Yours sincerely,
  ××××××
  Corresponding author:
  Name: ×××
  E-mail: ××××@××××

四、修改稿回答审稿人的意见

  (最重要的部分)
  List of Responses
  Dear Editors and Reviewers:
  Thank you for your letter and for the reviewers’ comments concerning our manuscript entitled “Paper Title” (ID: 文章稿号). Those comments are all valuable and very helpful for revising and improving our paper, as well as the important guiding significance to our researches. We have studied comments carefully and have made correction which we hope meet with approval. Revised portion are marked in red in the paper. The main corrections in the paper and the responds to the reviewer’s comments are as flowing:
  Responds to the reviewer’s comments:
  Reviewer #1:
  1. Response to comment: (……简要列出意见……)
  Response: ××××××
  2. Response to comment: (……简要列出意见……)
  Response: ××××××
  ……
  逐条意见回答,切忌一定不能有遗漏
  针对不同的问题有下列几个礼貌术语可适当用用:
  We are very sorry for our negligence of ………
  We are very sorry for our incorrect writing ………
  It is really true as Reviewer suggested that……
  We have made correction according to the Reviewer’s comments.
  We have re-written this part according to the Reviewer’s suggestion
  As Reviewer suggested that……
  Considering the Reviewer’s suggestion, we have ……
  最后特意感谢一下这个审稿人的意见:
  Special thanks to you for your good comments.
  Reviewer #2:
  同上述
  Reviewer #3:
  ××××××
  Other changes:
  1. Line 60-61, the statements of “……” were corrected as “…………”
  2. Line 107, “……” was added
  3. Line 129, “……” was deleted
  ××××××
  We tried our best to improve the manuscript and made some changes in the manuscript. These changes will not influence the content and framework of the paper. And here we did not list the changes but marked in red in revised paper.
  We appreciate for Editors/Reviewers’ warm work earnestly, and hope that the correction will meet with approval.
  Once again, thank you very much for your comments and suggestions.

五、文章接受后可以考虑感谢一下

  负责你文章的编辑或主编(根据需要)
  Dear Prof. ××××××:
  Thanks very much for your kind work and consideration on publication of our paper. On behalf of my co-authors, we would like to express our great appreciation to editor and reviewers.
  Thank you and best regards.
  Yours sincerely,
  ××××××
  Corresponding author:
  Name: ×××
  E-mail: ××××@××××

六、询问校稿信件

  (如果文章接受后时间较长)
  Dear ×××:
  Sorry for disturbing you. I am not sure if it is the right time to contact you to inquire about the status of our accepted manuscript titled “Paper Title” (ID: 文章稿号), since the copyright agreement for publication has been sent to you two months ago. I am just wondering that how long I can receive the proof of our manuscript from you?
  I would be greatly appreciated if you could spend some of your time for a reply. I am very pleased to hear from you.
  Thank you very much for your consideration.
  Yours sincerely,
  ××××××
  Corresponding author:
  Name: ×××
  E-mail: ××××@××××

七、文章校稿信件

  Dear Mr. ×××:
  Thanks very much for your kind letter about the proof of our paper titled “Paper Title” (ID: 文章稿号) for publication in “Journal Name”. We have finished the proof reading and checking carefully, and some corrections about the proof and the answers to the queries are provided below.
  Corrections:
  1. In should be (Page , Right column, line)
  2. In the “” should be “” (Page , Right column, line*)
  Answers for “author queries”:
  1. *.
  2.
  3.
  We greatly appreciate the efficient, professional and rapid processing of our paper by your team. If there is anything else we should do, please do not hesitate to let us know.
  Thank you and best regards.
  Yours sincerely,
  ××××××
  Corresponding author:
  Name: ×××
  E-mail: ××××@××××